Reading - Persuasive Writing

Persuasive Writing My Popplet

                                                                      My opinion: 

 Animals should stay in zoos to keep safe stay alive longer, animals should stay in zoos because it gives people a job,  lots of children will be up set with out zoos.

My Maths Tangram

For maths, we had to make a tangram this is what I made.

 

Quick Write 2020: The Lost Ship

 

150 years ago, a lost ship called st Jakob's was lost on a voyage across the Bermuda triangle. At the time lots of ships and planes have been lost over the Bermuda triangle. St Jakob's had 65 passengers and  was heading from Bermuda to Florida, st Jakob's was a wooden ship and had made 43 voyages in its career. but one night, they went off course in a storm and sailed further into the Bermuda triangle there were 4 life boats not enough for all 65 crew mates. The ship started shaking violently then barrel rolled in a wave, 7 men were swiped of deck the rest of the crew pilled into the life boats some not getting in. The ship was found 9 days later with 14 dead body's on board, two life boats sank and only 16 crew survived. 

Quick Write 2020: Twinkle Twinkle Little Flame

 

In a small town in Germany, two little boys named Hugo and Matthew both 4 years old were huddling round a small lit candle. It was very early in the morning and the two boys looked like silhouette. The  towns air was moist and had dark blue setting, there were many houses along a dead end road. The lantern was mettle and and had a small candle that lit up about 2 feet around the boys. The boys admired the candle as the rest of the town was in there homes hiding from the cold. As it started to snow, the boys didn't budge they stayed right there looking at the candle. 

The Shoping Mall

Planing:

see: tall palm trees with shimmering lights around them, many people walking round shops,bright lights surrounding the mall,

hear: escalators going up and down,baby's crying when they don't get what they want,loud back ground voices, 

feel: fluffy blankets in furniture shops, people bumping into you from all angels,

taste:freshly baked food from MacDonald's, drinks from vending machines,

smell: freshly baked food from MacDonald's, people some with gross breath 

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My story :)

As I enter the shopping mall, I hear a blast of booming music and loud background voices. I walked past a row of shops and onto a escalator, the escalator makes a faint buzzing noise as it goes upwards. I walk past another row of shops I hear mothers hushing baby's as they cry when they don't get the toy they want.

You can see large palm trees, with glimmering Christmas lights swirling around them. The shop windows filled from top to bottom with Christmas toys or decorations. Lights on both the shops and side railings blind you as you walk by. Many people walk up and down around the multi story mall, buying food, toys or furniture as they walk by.

You can taste and smell food around every corner because there is either a bakery, a fast food store or a restaurant you can eat at. Theirs freshly cooked burgers and fries at MacDonald's, nice surgery donuts at bakery's, Delicious food around every corner. 

You can feel fluffy blankets at furniture stores and warm food at food sources. When you try and walk around the crowded shopping mall, people bump into you no matter how careful you are. You can feel the blasting heat coming from all around the mall.  

 

My Fraction Knowledge

Notes For Voting

The Carnival Description

 As I enter, the carnival I see many glimmering lights flashing down on me, toothless carnies playing on some of the games with the glowing lights shining with the purple sky with the hot pink smoke.  As I enter, I rush over to the giant ferris wheel which is lopping round and round. I see the excitement on peoples faces as they play on the rides. I hop one the ferris and as I reach the top I look over the carnival bliding rainbow lights and charting people is what I can see.

I hop on the ferris wheel to go get some food. I smell the buttery popcorn popping away. The smell of freshly cooked hotdogs getting put into buttery buns all over the carnival you can smell an array of delicious unique food. You can smell some burning lights because the lights have been on for hours, the oven smells of all sorts of foods.

You can hear the pumping carnival music from miles away, You can hear blood curling terrified screams with a mix of joyful screams you can hear the sizzling food coming from the oven. In the background you can hear ambient chatter, with the parents of most of the kids saying stay close.

I can taste lots of Delicious foods like the swell of candy floss swirling around my mouth or the buttery salty popcorn. But let’s go in order, first I had a yummy  burger with lettuce, beetroot and other good stuff. Next I had fries they were salty and nothing else (im fussy). For desert I had a double scoop of caramel ice cream, that buttery salty popcorn and the candy floss, to finish off what I ate.

As I sit down in the roler coster seat, I feel the cold metal bar come down on me to keep me safe. The seats of the roller coaster aren’t comfortable like the seats on the ferris wheel, the pillows as soft as candy floss. You are aloud to touch the sheep and horse’s, there fur feels fluffy like a afro. 

As  I leave the fair ground my face goes from happy to disappointed I loved the fair ground, (even know i’ve never been to one in real life). I even didn’t get to go on like 2 of the rides. 

Prize Giving

 On the last day of the school holidays I went to my soccer prize giving. the whole parkland soccer committee was there. When i got there I couldn't find my team after a while of looking I found them. Me and some of my team played in a real cool hedge witch was good for climbing in we came back to where my team was and we sat and talked about when prize giving was happening. Most of my team was going to play in a big bush, then a disaster happened! i wasn't looking where I was going and walked into barb wire my knee was bleeding and i had to get a plaster. When prize giving started, we had to wait for ages for the other grades to have there turn. but when it was our turn, i got player of the year and i was super excited. i got my photo taken. When the prize giving ended i rushed home to escape the traffic. the end! 

Quick Write: Boys On The Wing

29.5.2039 Two dum German boys named Samuel and Reuben are on a large plane zooming across the bright blue sky. Reuben has small brown boots, green jeans and small blue jacket, Samuel has light brown shoes, blue jeans and a similar jacket. 

They were on a large German plane soaring above Frankfurt Germany. the blue and white plane had a long wing span a huge tail and engines the size of boulders. They were 24,000 feet above sea level!

On the ground  of Frankfurt it was rainy and miserable, but above the clouds there was no rain it was just bright and sunny.

The plane is roaring at 1000000 miles per hour and heading strait for a massive office building in France.