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Tuesday, November 17, 2020

Under Threat: Quick Write


The year is 2050, 14 years ago the alien invasion started they had taken over most countries now there were 7 remaining countries. those countries were u.s.a,  Canada,  Russia, Spain, France, china and new Zealand. All the countries went to meet up in Russia to make a plan. The countries decided to use bombs tanks jets and explode things to destroy them.

  A dum little boy named Samuel decided to be a jet pilot. The attacks started and the battle had begun... back in Russia there was thousands of guards and many more people but as the jets flew over Germany they drop the bombs, except Samuel he jumped out of his plane with Leon (who was a co pilot) jumped onto Reuben's plane who also jumped out and we went onto Aidans  and all 4 of us jumped onto the smartest person in the world Tama's plane. 

as he droped the bombs with his multi didget computer after turning on the stabilise steering and went back to fill up computer gas canisters.
Tama knew that the dum boys were on his plane because of his 4 dimension upward camera he landed safely. Yay!




3 comments:

  1. Hi, This is an amazing story I would love if there was a second story it fells like my story I made. Tama sounds very smart and intelligent ha.

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    1. Thanks Jack tama is very very smart

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  2. Kia ora Samuel. I really like your story because you added some paragraphs in it I find it hard to do that. This reminds me of a story I made at home. How long did it take you to finished this story? Tama it the smartest person I know

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