In the freezing cold of Iceland there was a icy cold snow storm approaching from up north. Amongst the storm was a little orange fox. the storm was making a blur a mucky white in the air and surrounding the ground with piles and piles of snow.
The little fox had smooth orange fur coated with snow, he has a large tale which is also orange to keep him warm. his little pointy black ears poking out from the top of his head, his ears help him find food.
his stomach is white and blends in with the snow and half his face is snow white as well. his big black eyes squint to see better though the snowy air.
His paws were black like night and guide him through the snow. his little snow covered black nose is idle to sniff out prey.
Hi Samuel your story is very cool (all puns intended) and the fox is very
ReplyDeletecute but I want to know what the fox was it doing in a storm and next time could you write more.I'm going to go chill out now.
Hi Samuel, I ,like your story it has lots of describing words. Good job on adding paragraphs, it reminds me of a story I did. Excellent work keep it up.
ReplyDeletehello Samuel I really like you so because you had a lot to describing words into it. This reminds me of when I did a quick write. Where did you get this picture from? I also like how you put paragraphs in this story I find it hard to do that. Great job
ReplyDeleteHi Samuel
ReplyDeleteI like the way you describe your story and chunked your writing but maybe next time you could writ a little bit more, but you are very smart Samuel.
Hi Samuel.
ReplyDeleteI like how well you have described this picture.
It makes me think of all the quick writes I have posted on my blog.
Maybe you could turn it into a story another time.
Do you think you should add more?